Sunday, July 19, 2009

My bouncy ball

A twitter short story (TSS)

Bouncing was its heart. Bouncing was its soul. Bouncing 'till it could bounce no more. What is a ball with no heart and soul?

2 comments:

  1. The problem isn't necessarily in the ball - maybe it just needs to bounce at a different pace, or in a different direction...

    (You should turn it into verses, it's very nursery rhyme-ish, I love it.)

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  2. well, it's short! Is there supposed to be more?

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